I am a web designer and started designing websites early 2023 I done some courses on Alison but most is self thought and youtube tutorials. I own my own agency and this is my agency website please be critical. webprintfamily.com
This is one I done for a rehab centre. purplecaprehab.co.za
I tried in white the font of your menu and I prefered them that way
The âCall Us todayâ and the Menu have the same background color, I would try a different color for the âCall..â or put a tiny line. Like it is it looks too much green
Facebook and LinkedIn links do not work
âWeb Managementâ, âLogo Designâ: I would put some radius corners to your 3 boxes
Your Vision, Our Expertise: Where are the proven results and clients? It would be helpful to see some real examples to support what youâre saying.
Verified: verified in what ? What does this mean?
Logo Design, Web Design Services: I would put some radius corners to your boxes
Testimonies: way to high.
After filling up your âContact Usâ and sending the message, I am seeing a white square
I canât enter an email address in the box below âEnter your business email hereâ in the footer
You donât give a clue in your home page where youâre geographically located. as far as I see you could be in Australia, Canada, or anywhere.
Packages
Too green for me
Youâre making your life more complicated offering hosting free for 6 months for Starter Package and 1 year for others. After a while, you will have trouble keeping track of that.
Services
I am confused: on your home page, youâre saying âWeb Managementâ, âWeb Design Servicesâ, âLogo Designâ and âSEO Servicesâ.
In services youâre saying âWeb Designâ, âGraphic Designâ and âDigital Marketingâ
In contact youâre saying âweb designâ, âlogo creationâ, and âmarketing servicesâ
In your footer: âWEB DESIGNâ, âLOGO DESIGNâ, âPOSTER DESIGNâ, âHOSTINGâ, and âDIGITAL MARKETINGâ
I reckon you should have some consistency in your wording
Youâre mixing your Services with a blog, I would create an extra section for what appears to be a blog
Contact
I see youâre in South Africa ! Working 7 days a week?
By the way, you are not printing anything, are you?
thank you for your critical response this is exactly what i neededâŚthe âPrintâ in our name WEB PRINT FAMILY means we leave a digital footprint of your business on the internetâŚI appreciate your time to check out every function I will fix my social media links and make the necessary changes and hopefully have you appraise it again.
Let us know when youâll have an updated version.
I see you mentioned another website, are you interested in my opinion? If yes, just give me a brief overview of what this website is all about, what the visitors are looking for, and in what way it is fulfilling their needs.
I reckon thatâs the reality for most website those days. Features like dynamic content, interactive elements, and fast navigation often relies on Javascript to work.
On my notebook the logo is too big, the text below Purple Cap is unreadable, and on my cell phone it doesnât look too good neither, impossible to read the business name. I am afraid to have it looking better you might need to remove the circle.
The menu fonts are too small
Not sure why in the footer youâre writing âSupportâ, âValuesâ and âTrustâ, they seem to appear has a header for âWhat we doâ, âContactâ and âKeep in touchâ
On my cell phone the menu might need to be a touch bigger, I have got big fingers
Home
Outline text âPurpleCap Rehabilitation Centreâ, on my notebook it isnât easy to read; on my cell phone that is the âStrenghening bondsâŚâ text that is hard to read as it appears above a white tee-shirt behind
As it seems to be a brick-and-mortar business I am missing your location
The black writing with the purple background on the âAbove Usâ button is hart to read. The same for âOur Servicesâ, especially on my cell phone. The Lobster font doesnât appeal me that much.
It seems the service is about rehab for for drug and alcohol addiction, the picture in âOur Servicesâ shows a fishing person, but isnât it a beer can I am seeing in the foreground ?
Our team
The text below Bernadette & Owen appears as header
I think it should be
Nothing related to the design but youâre saying âOur Teamâ but in fact youâre only saying something about the founders, nothing about the other people that can be seen on the picture.
About Us
Not very well organized, hard to read
On my cell phone the map needs some margin below
Contact
When I reached that page first I thought I had made a wrong move. On a contact page the 1st thing I am expecting to see is the contact form.
Youâre talking tree times about Confidentiality (that word appears 6x on that page): âConfidentiality and Trust at Purplecapâ, âConfidentiality Commitmentâ and âConfidentiality Assuranceâ. I think once is enough
Perhaps it is intentiontal but worth mentionning that the contact form it not asking for the First Name (same as on your site)
I think your footer could do with some work. The following was done quickly in photoshop, dragging things about - Iâm on my way out the door:). Itâs still not great, but illustrates a thought process.
Also note your text âCreative solutions for your digital presence today.â. You have a single âtodayâ on itâs own on the second line. This is known as an orphan, and isnât a good look.
CSS actually has a built in to help fix this text-wrap: balance. Note: you may still need to do some manual amendments.