On page optimization

ok so i got a page on point of sale in chicago

and obviously i want to target the keyword “point of sale” i want to see right solely onpage optimization were can i improve or what do i have missing. please tell me.

Please do not create multiple threads about the same subject, and don’t drop keyword-stuffed links into so many of your threads. It’s not cool.

Thanks for your cooperation, I’m sure you’ll get lots of advice in the other threads.

Didn’t we sort of cover that already?


and here.