On page optimization

Marketing
1

ok so i got a page on point of sale in chicago

and obviously i want to target the keyword “point of sale” i want to see right solely onpage optimization were can i improve or what do i have missing. please tell me.

2

Please do not create multiple threads about the same subject, and don’t drop keyword-stuffed links into so many of your threads. It’s not cool.

Thanks for your cooperation, I’m sure you’ll get lots of advice in the other threads.

3

Didn’t we sort of cover that already?

here

and here.