Hi everyone,
I’m new here and just getting started with web development and local SEO. I recently launched a site for a private luxury transportation business based in Los Angeles: https://www.lacaliluxury.com.
It’s built to help users easily book LAX-to-city rides across different areas in Southern California.
I’d love some constructive feedback on:
– User experience and layout
– Content clarity
– Mobile responsiveness
– Any technical improvements I should consider
This is one of my first serious projects, so any insights would be much appreciated. Thanks in advance!
This is highly personal. You use “ULP” (Ultra Long Page), which IMO is hard to navigate.
My first impression was this is a car dealer. Some customers in party clothes should reduce the “Honest Harry” impression. More focus on “service part”?
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Overall it’s not bad.
I found the esthetic at the top of the page too busy. And the blacks and greys from the cars clashing a bit with the blacks and white of the text.
White text on yellow background is usually a bad idea too.
You could probably make better use of the black header’s space at the top.
Not a fan of the super long pages either
A lot of pictures of cars. Basically none of people, and only one or two of those at most that i didnt think were stock images from a catalog. You have 17 locations, and no employees worth taking a picture of in a nice suit holding a door open?
Show me what the experience is going to be like, dont show me an advertisement for SUV’s. You’re a chauffeur service, not a car rental company.
ye, i think its not too bad too, as for link building, you will manage how to do this by yourself (at least i hope) you need to listen to hutley advices, and also sibertius is right too, because of site appearance you can think of car dealers site, but this is all fixable.
For a company that gives a service with chauffeurs I don’t see hardly anyone around. !
- The Location’s drop down list need a max-height and a slider
- The “About” page shows a useless picture below the title that pushes down the text, same for each location, do the same as in services where it’s fine
- “Get in touch” I am not sure a gmail address is to be used for a corporate website aiming at VIPs
- In each location I would change use a picture showing the area instead of a car (they are already enough of them).
- The copyright says “2023”
- You need it to be responsive