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    Website Review.

    Hi All,

    This is my first website using Dreamweaver. All the graphics are new to me using Photoshop and Illustrator. There are some alignment bugs that I have tried to no avail to debug. If you notice them and have any suggestions that would be great. Hint: It is not caused by line breaks or anything obvious like that. I am also having a js issue but I will post that in another thread.

    Thanks!

    http://cosmicstudios.co.cc/

    Web design for freelance or employment.

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    This review request is approved. Good luck mk --thanks for your patience!
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    Take a look at this site and grab some ideas
    http://newark1.com/
    Here's another one to look at
    http://www.wiidesign.com/
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    Just to give you some ideas
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    Quote Originally Posted by navyfalcon View Post
    Take a look at this site and grab some ideas
    http://newark1.com/
    Here's another one to look at
    http://www.wiidesign.com/
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    Just to give you some ideas
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    falcon
    There are thousands of sites he could look at and grab some ideas. Zen Garden comes to mind as do scads and scads of template galleries. This forum is for constructive criticism and comment, not a link drop area.

    I don't know where to start with this one. Quite honestly, if it was my site I would just start over. :/

    You really need to take a look at other web developer sites and compare what you have done to what the standard is today. Take a look at some of the template galleries or WP theme galleries or a site like Zen Garden. These are successful because they are the type of design folks are looking for.

    You also have one very noticeable spelling mistake in that blogging has two gs, not one. Your word testimonial is broken because the font you used in that area is too big for the area.

    Your graphics are very, very dated and scream "boiler plate clip art". I looked at your page source and I see nothing but the bloat that dream weaver puts into a page. This slows down page load.

    Sorry, but this one needs an overhaul. Before you start selling web design services, you really need to learn the craft.
    Linda Jenkinson
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shyflower View Post
    There are thousands of sites he could look at and grab some ideas. Zen Garden comes to mind as do scads and scads of template galleries. This forum is for constructive criticism and comment, not a link drop area.

    I don't know where to start with this one. Quite honestly, if it was my site I would just start over. :/

    You really need to take a look at other web developer sites and compare what you have done to what the standard is today. Take a look at some of the template galleries or WP theme galleries or a site like Zen Garden. These are successful because they are the type of design folks are looking for.

    You also have one very noticeable spelling mistake in that blogging has two gs, not one. Your word testimonial is broken because the font you used in that area is too big for the area.

    Your graphics are very, very dated and scream "boiler plate clip art". I looked at your page source and I see nothing but the bloat that dream weaver puts into a page. This slows down page load.

    Sorry, but this one needs an overhaul. Before you start selling web design services, you really need to learn the craft.
    Thanks.

    Can I put that in the 'Testimonials' section of my site?

    My God! I dont even know you!!!

    Just because its different?

    I asked you about the content??

    Your comment was non constructive And I didnt get anything out of it.

    Let me see yours.
    Last edited by mkspllmn; Oct 16, 2012 at 00:02. Reason: addition

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    Hi mkspllmn

    Do not get discouraged by harsh comments! Let's just say that the beauty is in the eye of the beholder. In terms of content you do not have enough of it. There are also some other problems. For example:
    - The title of your homepage is "Home" (try more descriptive title with your most important keywords - Keyword Density & Consistency)
    - There is no description meta tag
    - There are multiple images without ALT attributes:

    Images/Vector/BigLetters/w.jpg
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/Home.png
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/about.png
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/contact.png
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/siteMap.png
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/privacy.png
    Images/Graphics/footerNav/footer_06.png

    - There are multiple HTML Validation errors

    For more info checkout http://iwebchk.com/reports/view/cosmicstudios.co.cc

    Hope this helps, good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by mkspllmn View Post
    Thanks.

    Can I put that in the 'Testimonials' section of my site?

    My God! I dont even know you!!!

    Just because its different?

    I asked you about the content??

    Your comment was non constructive And I didnt get anything out of it.

    Let me see yours.
    Did you want an honest critique or did you come here expecting kudos for a job well done? Sorry, but I call 'em like I see them. And by the way... the screen shots you dug up my sites are all years old. Try looking at the real sites.

    Nothing useful... then do leave blogging misspelled, testimonials cut off at the 'a' and don't bother learning to code properly. Don't take the advice of anyone since competent web design might challenge your artistic sensibilities. My advice stands... go look at what others find success in doing if you want to be successful. Learn how to code using web standards instead of a WYSIWYG platform. Those standards are there to help you, not hurt you.

    At the end of the day, although the sites we design must please our clients, you please clients best by bringing them traffic that converts to business. That said, your design needs to be easy to navigate, written as the web surfer reads (and they read differently on screen than they do in print). The site needs to be cross-browser compliant since all browsers put their own spin on how they display websites.

    Sorry, after helping you get this approved I was hoping to see something spectacular, but it just isn't there and I care enough about the web to not lie and say it is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by mkspllmn View Post
    Thanks.

    Can I put that in the 'Testimonials' section of my site?

    My God! I dont even know you!!!

    Just because its different?

    I asked you about the content??

    Your comment was non constructive And I didnt get anything out of it.

    Let me see yours.
    There's no need to get defensive. She did provide you with some insightful commentary, especially since "she doesn't even know you" to paraphrase your own words. Outside eyes are always good because they don't need to apply any filters to try and save your feelings....and I don't think she was being that harsh (though I can see how you could take it that way).

    I think her point is the site looks very dated almost 10 years or more old, and it's brand new. And even the least tech savvy person is going to recognize the design is not what a lot of the other sites look like, and in this case, REALLY different is not a good thing.

    If you're going to promote yourself, you need to do it in the best light possible. For example, based on your site design, I wouldn't necessarily believe you designed the page shown on your PSD to HTML site - they look like two different people did it. One is VERY polished and slick, but your current page doesn't support it. Same for your logos - a couple there look like they have some promise (though they are small to see on laptops).

    Shy's point is to look at some other design sites and see how their sites are laid out and the content they carry. Keep the number of pages small, and decidedly less technical. If the user is savvy enough to understand the terminology, they're going to be more likely to be aware of what's current and effective, so you don't need to dumb it down that far. You've got to lower the ratio of techno-babble to marketspeak.

    If I were you, I'd work to drastically ramp up all aspects of your portfolio work and work to show them better. Then simplify your services to a page or two. Keep them simple and straight forward. And then I would work to make your site look as polished as the one on your PSD to HTML page (if that requires you to get someone to make the PSD for it, so be it).

    Just my $.02 (US) for what it's worth...
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    Here are three competitors to look at their meta tags
    Note: keywords amount a few so optimization is easier
    Description should be a good idea what the website is
    Title is important as it is the first thing the visitor sees and what they searched for

    <title>Web Design Portfolio by Don Peterson</title>

    <meta name="Keywords" content="web design portfolio, web designers, guide, articles, tips">

    <meta name="Description" content="A web design portfolio and guide from Donald Peterson.
    View our portfolio of award winning website design and learn from our articles and design
    tips!">

    Web Design Tips
    Shrink PNG Image File Size
    Better Design: Sleep On It!
    Don't Keep Them Waiting!
    The Power of Women Online
    Your Web Design Budget
    Web Hosting Recommendation
    Web Design Must Speak Clearly
    Search Engines & Web Design
    Free Fonts for Web Designers
    Web Design for Grown-Ups
    Web Design's Swiss Army Knife
    For New Web Designers
    Webmaster Tech Help
    Web Design on a Mac
    Web Design Photo Resource!
    Free Stock Photos Source!
    Speak the Client's Language
    How to Choose a Web Designer

    - - -

    <title>Wiidesign - web design portfolio</title>

    <meta name="description" content="A collection of websites and photography by web designer
    Willy Nielsen - commercial and personal. Based in Copenhagen, Denmark (DK)."/>

    <meta name="keywords" content="wiidesign, wiidesigns, wii design, wii designs, design,
    webdesign, web-design, willy nielsen, portfolio"/>

    - - -
    <title>Zen Garden - 800 CSS Web Templates</title>


    <meta name="description" content="CSS Zen Garden | CSS + HTM + JPG + GIF | 89.0 Mb Collection
    of 800 CSS Web Templates from CSS Zen Garden. A demonstration of what can be accomplished
    visually through CSS-based design. So What is This About? There is clearly a need for CSS to
    be..." />
    <meta name="keywords" content="Zen, Garden, 800, Web, Templates" />
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    hope this helps
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    http://freetutorials.name

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    I think the landing page can be more user friendly, you should make the visitors get your message directly in the most basic page.

    Also you may improve the page speed with merging variable js and css files

    I think it looks good overall, maybe little bit more detailing.

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    I like your site

    Quote Originally Posted by seoptimistic View Post
    I think the landing page can be more user friendly, you should make the visitors get your message directly in the most basic page.

    Also you may improve the page speed with merging variable js and css files

    I think it looks good overall, maybe little bit more detailing.
    Looking good!That's why I love this forum-you can get a exsact opinion on your qwestions and people will criticize or like your job-then you can goo back and fix it. My advice is to visite this forum more often. Good luck!Thanks everyone!

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    Not to sound too harsh but this is year 1997 in its beauty ))
    I would start from scratch — white background, black text, few paragraphs, nice header.
    Then add menu, maybe a color or two, background, a button.

    Also, if you are mostly a developer / coder such website would look ok since people shouldnt expect you to draw beautiful stuff.
    And indeed go to some design directory and check what people are doing nowadays.

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    Hi. I'd have to agree on the dated look of the site and start over from scratch.
    It happens to everybody. Myself included. And it is a good way to learn, if a bit harsh.
    My first impression on looking at the main page is confusion. I would most likely not go to the links or scroll down to the bottom
    Everything is splattered there.
    Too many needless design elements
    Too many different fonts. You usually want to stick to two.
    Lack of cohesion. Small buttons at top and the huge ones at he bottom.
    Lack of color co-ordination or a consistent palette.
    Think also of starting to desing with text and regular design elements offered by html & css then add to it with the graphics.
    There are two sites on you tube that I think would be very helpfull to you.
    For coding and design:
    https://www.youtube.com/user/phpacademy?feature=edu
    for design and overall advice
    https://www.youtube.com/user/mlwebco
    And one site wich also has youtube tutorials is:
    http://thenewboston.org

    Lastly, being defensive is not useful or helpful, just scratch consider it good exercise and start over.
    Like I said everybody has been there.

    Go try this guy out, video 45 trough 47 each about ten minutes will guide you trough creating a really nice css3 site.
    https://www.youtube.com/playlist?lis...C&feature=plcp

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    Don't feel bad. The reviews of my site make your reviews look great. But I take the reviews as they are meant, how to improve the site. So I do the best I can, others, I must wait until I learn how to do the task. I do get visitors and conversions, but as I improve, both visitors and conversions increase. My financial condition does not allow me to hire a professional so I resort to the forums. Many are professional web designers and builders so their advise is important.
    My advise (from a novice) is learn how to use the software tools that we all need. We all need software tools to help with correcting our oversights and minor errors. The software I recommend is free, when you become profitable enough, buy the upgrade or better software. By then you will know what you need.
    First, and most important "content is king". Showing what you can do to improve a site can do a lot for you. Then change it often and archive the old items. Be sure to categorize them for easy retrieval. Just show a few and if a person is interested, then they can view the rest. You need to know what person is interested in and what you can do for them to achieve that result. Each site is different, so you need to show different type of sites and how to improve.
    This is a different approach, so it may work for you.
    Don't give up but try changing a small part at a time. Eventually you site will reflect what you want and need.
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    I changed my site navigation to dropdowns (java script) and it helped then changed the dropdowns to external CSS and that helped. Changed the site from HTML tables to external CSS and that helped. Each change was small, but the site kept improving. I still am improving it. The reason I say this is so you can do it also. Small improvements sometimes are better than large improvements because you can keep improving. Each gives you encouragement.
    Now, for SEO, new content seems to work best and several small changes seem to work better than a large improvement (at least that is my experience).
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    For software you will need a "keyword suggestion tool", try http://www.keyworddiscovery.com/search.html. Use it in your title and description for best keywords. Then a "meta tag analyzer" to check the title and description (you need a keyword list to use a meta tag analyzer.
    http://www.submitexpress.com/analyzer/. You can Google search for others.
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    This should give you a start
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    hope this helps
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