A couple of stylistic things with your message--I think it's good to establish a sense of personality through the text, but you might re-consider a couple of things. Where you say you're a student and you need money so you're priced competitively, that might attract clients, but is that the client audience you want to target? When you say where you work and that you're a student and busy, it translates to me "go away, I'm too busy to work on your project now, but you might come back in the future." The information about your work and study program fit better on your about page than your home page, and you could add a message on your contact page that says "currently accepting small projects only--please check back later with other inquiries" or something similar. Otherwise, I'm afraid you'll get a lot of bounces from your home page.