This is my first real site. I know there would be a lot of mistakes, and I'd appreciate if you could point them out for me. Some of the sections still need to be worked on, so please bear with it. Cheers. Nav.
Well like wluke says I don't think opening two windows is a good idea. Also I'm not a big fan of "mystery meat" navigation. Might be a good idea to provide some clues as to where the various buttons might go before a user has to mouse over them.
Don't think you wrote the copy but you might suggest to your clients to rethink their tone. Right now it's just marketspeak and it turned me right off.
I think that you've done an excellent job with regards to the design. How familiar are you with Flash? it seems as if you have a good sense of style.
I would recommend that you add some more direction to the front page....I personally feel that you could do away with the image that has the M and the marketplace players in it (vendors, customers, etc.)
put your content on the left hand side of the page...and your images on the right.
if you don't mind me asking, how much are your charging your client for this site...you can email me at email@example.com if you would like to keep it private.
great color scheme...
on the second nav window (get rid of!) when you mouseover the small icons on top...your alt info gets in the way of the words that appear. get rid of the alt attribute...
Ok the first thing i would do is give the user to enter standard or html site as yes ok they might have flash installed but many browser installation put it on as default so users don't always know they have it and don't always want to use it. But the auto detect feature is pretty cool if you must use it.
The next thing is the two windows... no,no,no likey. I never understand why 80% of all flash pages i visit have to open two pages. It has to be said that the second page is a bit of an eye sore. The combination of that bgcolor and those terrible buttons achhh. There is potential but those buttons are evil. They don't blend in and what do they mean theres no title on them and i dont really want to hover over them to find out what they do. Yea that second page need some work.
The first page on the other hand is sweet. I like clean cut fresh look. The color use is good with the mixtures of blue/gray, orange,white whcih all blend in with the colors of the logo. Navigation is good althouh the content on the pages look kind of spaced out, or put over to the right side of the screen for some reason.
All in all the page is good, its just that second pop-up page that leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
Please note when i review i just tell it as i see it and am not complaining or anything so please do not take anything i say personaly
Thanks for your feedback guys. Really appreciate it. The pop-up window is really a client pet, and I finally gave into the client on all fronts including the atrocious colour. But yeah, the client seems quite happy with it. But I'd try asking him to remove it once more. If you guys want to skip the popup window go straight to http://www.mindflowinc.com/home.html
NO NO NO
DO NOT get rid of the ALT tags. It is shameful that the usability of the site is being compromised by the design. Get yourself a copy of any voice browser and then put your ALT tags straight back!
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when you mouseover the small icons on top...your alt info gets in the way of the words that appear. get rid of the alt attribute...
i still think this is a problem and being the creative person you are...i'm sure that you can find a workaround.
p.s. get back to me on my email when you can...thanks.
[This message has been edited by DLG_1 (edited June 14, 2000).]