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    please reviews Brownie freelance limited

    reviews please my website

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    is brownie freelance lmited the custom writing service site? Nice site, actually but you're selling an unethical product. As someone who got good college grades by studying, I find this site offensive.

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    I can't really say it's a good design. Here are some thoughts:

    -> relatively good stuff
    - colors are strong and appealing

    -> not so good
    - the design is too narrow
    - the navigation spreads on two rows
    - you are using about 10 text variations - try limit that to 2-4 variations
    www.bluepindesign.com - web design/graphic design/web development

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    Hi

    It's a good start, the text is nicely laid out and easy to read. Id it was my site I'd

    - widen the visible area to around 960 pixels
    - have a short introductory line of text, to summarise what you do (there's a lot to read to find out what you do)
    - add a some images or photos to the home page to help to connect with people

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    I'd widen it to 960 or 980pixels wide. it's 760 if I am not mistaken and too narrow. Just think about the fact most people have huge displays now, so you shouldn't worry about fitting in 800 wide screens.

    I would say you need to use more paragraphs (there's areas with huge chunks of texts) and maybe some more spacing within the elements. It all seems a bit crammed.

    Otherwise, it's pretty OK as colors are concerned.

    PS: you need to re-work the template code though. It's been years since the standard is not tables anymore. Code it in a clean div only template and it will make the source lighter and better.

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    change your logo from glowing to normal because its too much glowing.


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