Nah i can remove that last paragraph for advance, just me dropping keywords for anyone who cares really.
lol yeah im gonna remove all that hobby crap,
I've fixed the h1 up, it now says "wollongong web design & development" right up at the top. So its not stuffed with keywords and thats the most likely search term anyway, wollongong web design etc..
Most of the other headings are h2's, havn't bothered with h3's.
-reworded some portfolio stuff
- removed the hobby crap from bio
- de-personalised alot of the text