Hi fellow SPers,

I was hoping some of you might give me a hand with my site's copy for this SEO seminar I'm an affiliate for. I'd like to know if you think it's convincing, and if you would buy the seminar after reading the copy. Regardless of how you would react (buy/not), how can it improve?

The copy is at: Who Else Wants SEO Seminar's Original Tips?

Thanks ahead of time for your replies. Anyone with some constructive criticism can ask for me to give them a few SEO tips on their site design/copy (I'm asking about my sales copy here; SEO copy I know how to do) and send me to their post here on SP, or direct to the site. Just PM me.
(I've already done the three reviews required though.)