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    SitePoint Enthusiast marypainter's Avatar
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    Question Please review my website

    Please review my website

    Hi, please review my site http://maryamnasim.com. It looks fine in IE, but I am not sure how it may look in other browsers.
    This is a portfolio site so I may add more material to it as Iíll work more.

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    Maryam

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    I like most of the site. Itís a nice clean layout but there are a few things that could look slicker. On the pages with content there should be cell padding so the letters are so far left. The beeps on mouse over are some of the less annoying beeps that I have heard but it may be better without them there.

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    Seems to hold up fairly well in Firefox. I agree with thebestsean about the padding, otherwise looks good.

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    This is a nice site. I agree though the text needs to padded better from the sides. Also on some of the pages the spacing before the picture would look cleaner (Example).
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    Hey Maryam

    I liked your site and i'd not repeat cell padding thingy.
    Add a link on the logo to the site index... I mean on the image and maryamnasim.com on top-right side.

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    Hi Thanks you all , padding done... please if anyone can check it again in firefox and also netscape?
    thebestsean
    i am trying to found a good sound, and also plan to change the buttons a bit on mouseover.
    Ronudy
    May you check it again in firefox? I wanna know how is it working after these changes (thanks)
    monsterhosting
    spacing before picture is given .(thanks)
    Imran-sami
    i'll think abt doing something with logo as well. thanks

    Anymore suggestions plz?

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    I am looking at in FF. I like the design and the concept. Very interesting. It took me a minute to see the word "paintings" because in that particular image, there is a lot going on to distract from the word. This could be just me.

    One thing I would suggest would be to liven up your internal pages. When I click on Contact for example, it just brings me to this grey and black page. I understand you are keeping theme with the from pga eusing some grey, but why not add some color and style into at least you headings, i.e., Contact and paintings.

    Another suggestion would be when you click to enlarge a painting, keep the site consistent. Leave the header at the top and perhaps put a "Back" graphic above the black box displaying a painting.

    Overwell nice job.
    Sara

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    What a great website!

    I think it's great, excellent animations and pictures.

    I agree with thebestsean about the sounds on mouseover but apart from that I really like it!

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    Nice design
    Very creative!

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    ultimatehandyman, jubinrr and sara thanks

    anymore suggestions plz?

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    Looks great in Firefox. I suggest you download Firefox (free of charge) so you can test your future websites in it as well:
    http://www.mozilla.org

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    hmmm nice suggestion shockt. and can i download netscape as well?
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    Maryam

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    Strange to have a front page / spash / interface that you can completely sidestep. I would perhaps lose the front page and instead expand the "flash gallery" section, speeding up the users path into the site and to the best bits: your animation.

    I think the body sections still need more space between the header and the first line of text.

    Design aesthetic is great and I think it's all really cute.

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    I think that the site is really cool. It really fits the concept of your art. Keep up the good work!

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    lolz thanks for the comments particle. S_spice thanks for appreciation.
    Regards
    Maryam

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    Hi Mary,

    I like your site. I think I would add some spacing before each of the page titles and change the fonts. The black round square behind all of the images is too much. Maybe you could highlight your images by using a light background with a solid line around them. You can see how Veerle does it on her site http://veerle.duoh.com/

    Lastly, check out how this guy does his contact form: http://www.simplebits.com/contact/

    Also, I wonder how many know that "Interface" is your "Home" button.

    Your animations are cool.

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    Thanks for the suggestions and showing me this cool site .
    Maryam

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    I love the site; I am not a real fan of flash but I love your wacky design and theme.

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    congratulations for the site, I look it well in my 19" display

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    Thanks Pannick and juanda2

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    Very creative. Love the freehand.

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    I feel you might need to make the navigation alittle more clear because the highlight isn't enough to show the contrast of the text against the background. Also, you might want to push the title of the pages a little lower. That might help solve the problem of the navigation a little. Love the paintings.

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    nice website.....
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    First of all, I like your creativity. Your mouse-over flash design is something unique.

    <constructive criticism>

    I don't know who you are or what you're about, just based on what I see from your home page. That information should be presented (either graphically or literally) so that the viewer sees it in the first few seconds. I assume that you're an artist/graphic designer, but that's not readily apparent right away.

    </constructive criticism>

    Otherwise, this is a nicely designed, creative site.

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    thanks for appreciation suggestions noted...


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