there are 16 of them already!

[excessus]

I have 16 strips already... can I have some feedback please?

I know the site does not work with Netscape as yet but you can still get the strips

http://www.marbella.com/strip

-- Ex

[mmj]

I remember these. Cool.

The site design, all in black and white, is excellent.

I like strip #13! Good luck getting some more funny ideas!

I notice the strips take quite a while to download. How have you optimised them?

I encourage you to reduce them to 16 colours, without dithering/diffusion, and save them as 16-colour gif. That is, reduce them to 16 colour with an optimised octree set to "Nearest colour" and then save it as 16-colour gif.

What graphics program do you use? Just wanting to help...

[atomicmunky]

i just read through all of them. they're pretty funny !

good work Ex !!

[aspen]

If you're going to write them in english you should have someone who is a native english speaker proof read them for you. I just noticed 1 error in the first one (didn't read the others)

"sit" is present tense, if you're talking past tense use "sat"

[Aidan Bahta]

Wow, those are pretty cool. I read them all

[mmj]

Yes, I would recommend getting someone to proof-read them, as you create new ones.

I'm sure some people here would do that for you.

Don't create all new threads though you could email some of them to me if you want.

[Owen]

dude, it rocks! pretty funny stuff, man.

anyway, you should *wink wink* submit it to my humor directory *hint hint* and get some more visitors.

Owen

[excessus]

Hey thank you everybody for the feedback and moral support! I needed that! Sometimes you don't know if you are going in the right direction =)

Thanks for your offer MMJ... i think i'm going to take your advise and do exactly what you said! thanks lot!

OK... going now to register Dan site in the humour directory.

Cheers!!

**friendship points scored**

[Sparkie]

Hola excessus,

I'd be glad to help you revise your comic strips in English.

[Fluffykins]

If you need anyone to check out the grammar for you i'd be happy to. Cool site by the way, the design is great and some of the comic strips are really funny.

Especially the one with the guy in the radiation suit cos he's scared of a monitor

Ady

[Sparkie]

You should have one of the fellow propping his eyelids open with toothpicks while doing some late-night programming.

Hasn't anyone here ever done that?

[excessus]

Ahah! Why... yes of course! I love to waste saturday night with my computer, staying up late doing all sort of weird things =)

This is when everything is quiet and hours flies...

Again, thanks for your morale and offers! (and if you ever have an idea...)