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    is very happy now :) Itay Neeman's Avatar
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    Hi People,

    My girlfriend was sad the other day, so I wrote her a song, and it came out pretty nice, and I am now looking for someone/band to make a tune for it and if they want to play it. Its kind of a contest, so the band to come up with the best tune gets rights over the song =)
    I know this is a big mistake but I pasted the song below, please try not to laugh to much =)

    Angel in Disguise / Itay Neeman

    I remember a time many years ago,
    When besides me walked a beautiful dame,
    One of charm and fame.
    She walked so elegantly, so lightly,
    She held my hand in peace and calm
    She was an angel in disguise.

    Chorus:
    Her face so soft,
    Her eyes so knowing
    A heart that understands
    She was always there,
    Standing firm as a rock,
    Being soft as the sand,
    My angel in disguise.

    I remember a week ago,
    As I was walking through the forest,
    My beautiful dame arrived,
    There to guard me from all.
    She looked into my eyes,
    She spoke 3 words only.
    She spoke "I love you",
    And at the same moment it seemed,
    That all my troubles were no more.

    Chorus:
    Her face so soft,
    Her eyes so knowing
    A heart that understands
    She was always there,
    Standing firm as a rock,
    Being soft as the sand,
    My angel in disguise.

    While I am lying in my bed,
    All cold and lonely,
    She comes to me,
    She rests besides me,
    She gives me a kiss .
    She makes the world fade away,
    And my bed into the light.

    Chorus:
    Her face so soft,
    Her eyes so knowing
    A heart that understands
    She was always there,
    Standing firm as a rock,
    Being soft as the sand,
    My angel in disguise.

    I remember a time long ago,
    When my dame was in fright,
    She had worries in her eyes,
    And her face was tired.
    And I gave her a kiss,
    And I wiped her tears,
    And for a little while,
    I became her angel in disguise.

    Thx,
    Itay
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    now all I need is a backbeat and Ill be at the top of the pop charts worldwide!!!

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    You might need to take some lessons poetry Itay

    My Dutch teacher would gove me an F for such a poem in dutch

    But oh well... Love is blind

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    Are you going to sing it to her Itay?

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    Don't tease the lad he's obviously in love
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    Nice song Itay.

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    Thats beautiful.

    Using that as inspiration, I just dumped my gf
    haha



    Adam

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    is very happy now :) Itay Neeman's Avatar
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    Song No. 2 - This is much more singable, so please help me out:

    Missing / Itay Neeman

    Lying in my bed,
    My eyes all and red,
    I lay there still,
    Letting time heal.

    It has been ages,
    And for you I have written many pages,
    The silence broken only by the soft beat,
    The dreary cold broken only by your remembered heat.

    Chorus:
    Iím missing so much,
    And youíre barely in touch,
    Itís been eras since weíve been together,
    And next time I will make it last forever.

    Today I saw you again,
    And when you said goodbye I felt so much pain,
    A part of me was taken away,
    Stolen and with you it will stay.

    When we talked today,
    We had a fight and you wanted to go away,
    And only that cold thought of you alone,
    Made me convince you to return home.

    Chorus:
    Iím missing so much,
    And youíre barely in touch,
    Itís been eras since weíve been together,
    And next time I will make it last forever.

    Itís been ages again,
    But now it is much less pain.
    I now know that together we are strong,
    And we will never lose to the wrong.

    So always remember,
    Forever and ever,
    That I am with you where ever you are,
    If your close and if your far.

    Chorus:
    Iím missing so much,
    And youíre barely in touch,
    Itís been eras since weíve been together,
    And next time I will make it last forever.

    So always remember,
    Forever and ever,
    That I am with you where ever you are,
    If your close and if your far.
    Itay - [email] [icq]
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    ::tears::


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