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    I need help with some wording.....

    I want to say something more creative than "my blog spotlights entrepreneurs". Any suggestions?
    I don't really care for "spotlights" "focusses on" "targets" "features" "exposes" or "displays"
    Any creative help would be appreciated.

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    What is your target market?

    At the bottom of the Bing & a Google Searches the following were listed for "Related searches for entrepreneurs".


    Bing:
    Top 10 Entrepreneurs
    Famous Entrepreneurs
    Teen Entrepreneurs
    How to Become an Entrepreneur
    Qualities of Successful Entrepreneurs
    Entrepreneur Definition
    Entrepreneur Opportunities
    Top 10 Entrepreneur Jobs


    Google:
    entrepreneurs definition
    top 10 entrepreneurs
    successful entrepreneurs
    list of successful entrepreneurs.
    list of entrepreneurs
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    Who are you targeting the message "my blog spotlights entrepreneurs" at? Is it aimed at:

    1. Entrepreneurs who you want to attract to your blog?

    2. Advertisers who are selling something aimed at entrepreneurs?

    If 1, I would go with something like this:

    Information and advice for entrepreneurs everywhere

    If 2:

    Your perfect platform for reaching out to entrepreneurs

    Either way, get rid of "my blog" (or anything else involving "me", "my", "I", etc).

    Mike

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    Possibly something like, "giving entrepreneurs notoriety in their fields"... or "helping entrepreneurs achieve notoriety" ? Without knowing the intent of the blog, I'm not sure on wording. These suggestions may not make too much sense, depending on the context.
    Erin Walsh
    Director of PR, Boost Software, INC.
    http://boostsoftware.com

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    My blog:
    emphasizes the unique impact entrepreneurs have on XXX
    delves into the inner workings of entrepreneurs in XXX field
    showcases entrepreneurs (I know it's close but you didn't mention it so I'm throwing it in there)

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    Let us know your target market at first

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    Thanks for everyone's input, but this is an old thread and the OP never returned, so I'm closing it.


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